TIP #21 Writing task 1 (General Module) Know the requirements of map visuals & put them into your structure

The requirements of a map visual are:
1. Show proficiency making change grammatical structures
2. Show proficiency at describing location
3. Show proficiency at contrasting past tense with present
4. Show proficiency at contrasting present tense with future tense
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Now put this into a checklist to assess your writing
Pre-Writing Checklist ✅
Introduction:
☐ Name the map type/location/time period
☐ Give 2 general observations:

• Scale of changes (dramatic/limited)
• Most significant improvement

Body Paragraphs:
☐ Group changes logically (by area/time)
☐ Include 3-4 specific changes with:

• Contrast structures (while/whereas)
• Tense shifts (past → present perfect)
• Passive voice ("was constructed")
• Precise locations ("200m northeast of...")

Conclusion:
☐ Future implication (1 sentence)
☐ Avoid new data

Model answer [Visual taken from Cambridge IELTS Practice tests 9 p.30]
Task 1 Prompt
"The maps below show changes to a coastal village between 1995 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features."

.Model Answer (169 words)

The maps show Seaside Island's development from 1995 to present. Overall, the untouched island has been transformed into a functional tourist destination with new infrastructure.

The most significant changes are the addition of a pier on the northern coast and a circular housing complex (14 units) in the previously forested center. A recreation center has been built and now stands 15m north of the pier, and a restaurant was constructed 20m further north.

Transport infrastructure has been completely introduced: a vehicle track now links the pier to both the recreation center and housing, while footpaths connect to western residences. Notably, the eastern forest remains preserved, and the small western woodland now contains 6 houses but otherwise stays unchanged.
In summary, the island has evolved from wilderness to a planned community. These developments will likely support tourism while maintaining some natural areas.
 


Post-Writing Assessment
Why This Scores Band 9:

1. Structure:
   • Intro: Names location + 2 generalizations
   • Body: Groups changes (waterfront → housing → infrastructure)
   • Conclusion: Future implication without speculation
2. Language:
   • Contrast: " while footpaths….
   • Passives: "has been built", "was constructed". “has been completely introduced.”
   • Precise locations: "15m north of the pier", "20m further north."
3. Data Selection:
   • Covers all key changes without listing every detail
   • Balances old/new comparisons (e.g., house numbers, forest coverage)
     
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Common Mistakes Avoided:
✖ Overusing "there is/are" (uses active verbs: "extending", "connect")
✖ Mixing tenses incorrectly (consistent past → present perfect shifts)
✖ Vague locations ("near the center" → "20m north")

Pro Tip: Practice sketching maps from model answers like this to visualize spatial relationships - it trains you to interpret real IELTS maps faster.