Exit Exam Tip #1

Developing the thesis statement

1.Use a ‘hook’ opener that connects to the theme
                 E.g. 1 We all experience ……..
                 E.g. 2 Part of growing up is……

2. Include the title, author and prompt. Answer the prompt in your introduction
               X In the article “Head Cook at Weddings and Funerals” by Vi Plonikoff, Marusa is the main character.
               √. Marusa, in the story “Head Cook at Weddings and Funerals”  by Val Plonikoff, is a head-strong girl who                                 eventually gives in to the pressures of her  community.

3. Make a statement about a targeted tool (eg symbolism)
               X In the article “Head Cook at Weddings and Funerals” by Vi Plonikoff, Marusa is the main character. She                                 represents the futility of rebellion (vague, broad) 
              √. Marusa, in the story “Head Cook at Weddings and Funerals”  by Val Plonikoff, is a head-strong girl who                             eventually gives in to the pressures of her community. She represents the  constant pressure  between the spirit                 of independence and the more powerful force for any individual to conform to the long-held tradition (better)